It would help if you read the book “Ten Years in the North Korean Gulag by Kang Chol-Hwan”. i wrote the paper. Just fix these mistakes my professor want’s me to fix and that’s all:
1. It’s much too short for the only assignment in the semester. You’ve only just begun to examine the thrust of the book. Add more to your writing.
2. Use at least 2 direct quotations from the book throughout your paper to flesh it out. You really want to explore the book and discuss what the author is thinking and doing throughout the book as he tells his tale.
3. Try to be less stiff and formal in your writing. This is a paper about a book about North Korea, not a lab report.
4. Proofread. The paper is riddled with typographical errors. Obviously, this is a rough draft. It’s not supposed to be perfect.
