Develop an introduction to the problem and paper in one paragraph. Take a look at Tiffany and Amanda’s work to give you an idea how it should be developed.

Need a revision of a previous order. The instructor has left comments. Her comments are highlighted in yellow or track changes. One of them is “The introduction is way too long. Develop an introduction to the problem and paper in one paragraph. Take a look at Tiffany and Amanda’s work to give you an idea how it should be developed.